chinese introduction

This is room 7s chinese introduction each person in room 7 had to say hello my name is, their phone number and good bye. This is what i thought of mine. My Chinese introduction was ok because I didn't need to look at the script I think I could have done a bit better by looking at the camera rather than looking some where else. I think that my fluency was good because we have only been learning chinese for about 6 or 7 weeks.